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Stuck In A Moment

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A lot of meaning in this one. The more you look - the more you see.

I hope you like it.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Here is the critique that you requested.

The over all color scheme reminds me of something you might see during the 60s and 70s. the blue clashes a little bit but it working because of the tone that you used. I think that the illustrated strip could have been off setted a little more perhaps lifted up more to the left hand corner. The typography along the illustrated strip is really comprehensible, I mean is it a name or a logo? I think that the stuck in the moment part could have been brought to a larger point side, I mean while a small text does draw attention it still needs to be more noticeable, especially since you have this in a poster like format. Perhaps if you had the stuck in a moment doing something a little more dynamic like repeating it more while going in larger to small while sweeping toward the centeralized part of your illustrated strip.

Hope that helps.