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©2008-2009 =HardToName
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Artist's Comments

A lot of meaning in this one. The more you look - the more you see.

I hope you like it.

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:iconking-rastel:
Here is the critique that you requested.

The over all color scheme reminds me of something you might see during the 60s and 70s. the blue clashes a little bit but it working because of the tone that you used. I think that the illustrated strip could have been off setted a little more perhaps lifted up more to the left hand corner. The typography along the illustrated strip is really comprehensible, I mean is it a name or a logo? I think that the stuck in the moment part could have been brought to a larger point side, I mean while a small text does draw attention it still needs to be more noticeable, especially since you have this in a poster like format. Perhaps if you had the stuck in a moment doing something a little more dynamic like repeating it more while going in larger to small while sweeping toward the centeralized part of your illustrated strip.

Hope that helps.
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:iconfuzzyrocker:
i really like this its awsome!

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(\_/) copy the bunny
(0.o) into your sig
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:iconthehalogen:
That's HAWT, Make a WP version?
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:iconthe-vheissu:
The maroon palm trees need to be erased at the bottom, so that they seem to be on top of it and not in front. (Did that make any sense.)
:iconeyeqhofman:
Very nice, indeed
me leik
:iconliersie:
nice but it looks so simple :P

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:iconshadowblitz07:
add more to it,but it nice,agreed with lars
:iconsupersheepr:
Nice job. Looks better then your ava's :thumb92442267:

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